Thursday, November 3, 2011

Comments I Made

Your story is very interesting, but I think you overused the explanation mark.You also had a few misspelled words. It sounds like you had a very interesting summer.
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This sounds like you would live a very luxurious life if you were rich.Wouldn’t you be scared about being robbed if you were that rich?
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I like this post but I had trouble reading it so you might want to consider changing the font.
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