Monday, August 29, 2011

Internet Safety

This is a story about a girl named Meranda.Meranda was a very lonely child.She thought she could solve her loneliness  by meeting someone online.So she went to a bunch of different chat rooms to try to find someone.She ended up meting someone online who said he really cared about her.So they chatted online for a few months, then they decided to meet in person.They decided to meet at Walmart.It ended up that this guy was a lot older than Meranda and he really didn't care about her.This guy ended up kidnapping her and abusing her.

This site is called Netsmartz and it  inspired me to right this story.

5 comments:

  1. Good story but I think you should of added something like they met in a spot with not many people there and at walmart there is alot of people

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  2. Dear, Zeke this is a good story, but next time you need to spell check it.

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  3. This shows one of the possibilities of what can happen when you talk to strangers online. Good job on writing your story, just one thing you need to work on next time you write. Try double checking on your spelling. Don't worry I tend to mess up all the time when it comes to spelling so I'm quite religious when it comes to checking twice.

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  4. Hi Zeke, I think that this was a good story but,you had some mis-spelled words. Other than that this was a good story.

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  5. WOW!!

    I can't beleive this is true!!!

    I can't beleive there are people in the world that do that!!!

    FROM DK

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