Thursday, November 3, 2011

Comments I Made

Your story is very interesting, but I think you overused the explanation mark.You also had a few misspelled words. It sounds like you had a very interesting summer.
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This sounds like you would live a very luxurious life if you were rich.Wouldn’t you be scared about being robbed if you were that rich?
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I like this post but I had trouble reading it so you might want to consider changing the font.
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Monday, October 17, 2011

Why I Write

I write when I do my homework and, to tell a tale and, tell about myself and, about other people,or to make people laugh.

Thursday, October 13, 2011

The Cabin

As I skip toward the cabin I see the chimney and can imagine the warmth of the fire burning inside.I can see the trees around me welcoming me to the cabin,as I walk joyfully towards the cabin, watching the snow flakes around me hit the ground to join its friends.

Thursday, September 22, 2011

Our Online School Library

Q.Can you use the library outside of school?Explain

A.Yes you can use the library outside the school Because its online.

Q.Is using this site legal in regards to copyright? Why or Why not?

A.Yes it is legal because they give you the rights to check out the book.

Q.Identify 2-3 books you might want to read. What makes them something you want to read?

A.Stop, drop, and flop in the slop a...,What is money, anyway? why dollars and...I want to read this book because it looks very interesting.

I have found a book or two that might help us in Social Studies,I saw one about he constitution and a few others.


Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Creative Comments

I chose open so others can learn from what i post and so that they can learn from it and change it,and so i can learn from what they change as well.I also made it where others can't make money off of what i write because if anybody gets money from what i write its gonna be me.I also chose share view because i don't want to give someone information from my blog for free and then they make people pay to see it somewhere else.

Friday, September 2, 2011

Science Experiment 2011

Original Methodology
Step 1.Gather Materials
Step 2.Take the shell off of seed
Step 3.Set two 2 ounce cups on table
Step 4.Fill the cup 3/4 of the cup with soil
Step 5.Stick the bean half way in the cup
Step 6.Pour the water/7 up 10mL in the cups
Step 7.Place in sunlight
Step 8.Repeat step 5 until one one plant sprouts
Step 9.Record growth result of plant height
Step 10.Every day record growth of plant with ruler for two weeks


Revised  Methodology
Step 1. Gather safety materials
Step 2.Gather materials
Step 3.Get two Beans similar size and texture
Step 4.Weigh beans to make sure they are similar weight
Step 4.Get 2 cups
Step 5.Put dirt in the cups
Step 6.weigh dirt to make sure you have similar weight
Step 7.Put the seed half way in the dirt
Step 8. Use graduated cylinder put 10 milliliters of water in one cup.
Step 9.Put 10 milliliters of 7 up in other cup
Step 10.Record growth of plant every day on a calender.




Monday, August 29, 2011

Internet Safety

This is a story about a girl named Meranda.Meranda was a very lonely child.She thought she could solve her loneliness  by meeting someone online.So she went to a bunch of different chat rooms to try to find someone.She ended up meting someone online who said he really cared about her.So they chatted online for a few months, then they decided to meet in person.They decided to meet at Walmart.It ended up that this guy was a lot older than Meranda and he really didn't care about her.This guy ended up kidnapping her and abusing her.

This site is called Netsmartz and it  inspired me to right this story.